Oh god, I can't work on it anymore. Thank you all for your help, I hope this is not anticlimactic or anything... I might change it more still... I'm kind of unhappy with some parts of it but at the moment so if I find the will, I may go back and change some things but I just can't imagine putting more work into it atm lol.
I don't really read Spawn so sorry if he's not cool enough lol!
give more affect like on his hand. make more terrify