For not putting much thought into it that is an amazing redesign. You kept that sort of sex appeal look, but beefed up the armor. The mismatch shoulder's and boots are awesome touches and give it a great look. GReat colors too. Only critque would have been the legs, which you know about. Great piece of work.
Blade too clean, the blue skirt over her blade hand dosen't make any sense it gives impression that the hand is a bit behind the hip while that isnt really right from the sword angel.
I want to paint like you